Poems Based On The Most Desirable Ad Keywords, Part II

A Higgledy-Piggledy On The Theme of “Mesothelioma Lawyers”
Asbestos tragedies,
mesotheliomas
happen most frequently
inside folks’ pleuras.
Then they get bloodthirsty
mesothelioma
lawyers to harass their
stingy insurers.

2 Responses to “Poems Based On The Most Desirable Ad Keywords, Part II”

  1. Andrew

    Not bad, but not really a higgledy-piggledy. It meets some of the rules, but the meter is _completely_ off 🙂

  2. Jacob

    Yes, I confess–I used lines that were not strictly dactylic if they sounded metrically pleasing. The Man isn’t going to force me to obey his higgledy-piggledy rules. Fight the power!